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Cricket Article.
Peter Moores the right man for Lancashire?
With the news coming from Old Trafford that Peter Moores has signed a new two year extension to his existing contract, I thought I'd take the chance to look at what Moores has achieved so far.
As a fan of Lancashire for nearly 10 years it has been a tiring time, thinking this could be the year we really make a charge only for the weather put a huge dent in our season. Great players like Peter Martin and Neil Fairbrother, not getting the opportunity to lift the most prestigious trophy in English cricket.
When Moores took over, he was coming away from the England set up, and personally I was concerned that, possibly, he hadn't quite recovered from the set back with England, and the fact it was a player that effectively gave him the boot, led me to question whether he was a good enough man manager for the county scene. I am happy to say that he has proven me wrong.
He has installed a winning mentality in the squad, which, on the whole is home grown. He has taken players like Karl Brown and Steven Croft and given them responsibility that has seen them grow in stature, and improve as players. While doing this he has been astute with the players he has brought in, Stephen Moore is a prime example, he has given us the explosive edge to really take hold of games.
From last season I believe that Moores, the team and all of the staff and Lancashire will take huge confidence, too achieve the first championship win in seventy seven years is a huge achievement, the magnitude of which can not be understated.
Been so long since I've written anything like this, anyway there's the first draft guys. All feedback is welcomed
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Hi Hampo - thanks for being the first!
I will give you a little bit of feedback and please take this as a positive!
First thing - the images dont seem to be working.
With regards to the content of the article, I would say its a great start. However, I think it needs a little padding - seems a little short at the moment.
Maybe put in a paragraph about the troubles he had at England. I would also maybe expand a little on the changes he has made this season to back up your claim of them being title winners.
As I said, these are just my opinions and what you have there is a very good base to make it an excellent article. Well done mate
I will give you a little bit of feedback and please take this as a positive!
First thing - the images dont seem to be working.
With regards to the content of the article, I would say its a great start. However, I think it needs a little padding - seems a little short at the moment.
Maybe put in a paragraph about the troubles he had at England. I would also maybe expand a little on the changes he has made this season to back up your claim of them being title winners.
As I said, these are just my opinions and what you have there is a very good base to make it an excellent article. Well done mate
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Yeah not sure why the pictures aren't working, used imageshack, checked on my phone and it comes up with a view image link, very strange. I'll be able to pad it out in work tomorrow, cheers for the feedback though dude.
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will contact the LCCC tomorrow about getting press passes for some games/ interviews
Take a look and tell me if there is a specific one that you want to go to and if there is a player you would like to interview.
http://www.lccc.co.uk/index.php?p=fix
Take a look and tell me if there is a specific one that you want to go to and if there is a player you would like to interview.
http://www.lccc.co.uk/index.php?p=fix
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Will have another look tomorrow mate, would very likely be a Sunday game though. Anything you can sort would be great mind.
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Looking at the fixtures mate, 6th of May is the first one I could make against the Leicester Foxes.
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Anyone else interested in cricket writing please let me know. If there is more than just me and hampo then I will look at organising us so that we cover plenty of different angles. I've done a fair bit of writing for All Out Cricket since the 606v2 link with them, so there is a possibility I could get some of your pieces published on their site. Also, I'm always available if you need any ideas/comments/feedback etc.
Ta.
Ta.
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Fists you know me, I can recite you all the interesting stats, but my knowledge is lacking on a global scale.
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Biltong, you could be very useful. You know on SKy how they have Benedict to feed all the stats to them? If you could play a part in retrieving stats about a player or team whenever someone is planning to write an article on them, you'd be invaluable!
A mysterious behind the scenes man that is mentioned by name in the credits
A mysterious behind the scenes man that is mentioned by name in the credits
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I would advise you to beg cricketfan or stella to assist, their knowledge is much broader than mine mate.
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Peter Moores the right man for Lancashire?
With the news coming from Old Trafford that Peter Moores has signed a new two year extension to his existing contract, I thought I'd take the chance to look at what Moores has achieved so far.
As a fan of Lancashire for nearly 10 years it has been a tiring time, thinking this could be the year we really make a charge only for the weather put a huge dent in our season. Great players like Peter Martin and Neil Fairbrother, not getting the opportunity to lift the most prestigious trophy in English cricket.
When Moores took over, he was coming away from the England set up, and personally I was concerned that, possibly, he hadn't quite recovered from the set back with England, and the fact it was a player that effectively gave him the boot, led me to question whether he was a good enough man manager for the county scene. I am happy to say that he has proven me wrong.
If we take a look at his time at the helm of the England cricket team, he may have lost four of the seven test match series that he was in charge for, but England where in a rebuilding stage and injuries to key players such as Michael Vaughen didn't help. For a man taking over what was essentially, a mess after Duncan Fletcher left that is a respectable record. He brought new life to the England set up, he brought a fun factor which the player seemed to enjoy. He had laid the foundations for what is now a very successful England team under Andrew Flower, and a lot of credit must go to him for that.
The sacking of Peter Moores told me more about the ECB than Peter Moores himself, it told me that player power was first, second and last, and that the coaches opinion at that time counted for nothing. It was he, who made the decision, along with the selectors to include Darren Pattinson, it was also the same people that believed Steve Harmison was ready for a recall to the test team. Moores alone could not have made the decisions, and in all honesty, is was let down by these people when the issues with Pieterson arose. They should have stood by him, no one man is bigger than the team.
The same zest and energy that he took to the England game was even more invigorated when he took over at Lancashire, the will to win was even stronger and I believe the experience he gained with England has made him one of the best domestic head coaches around today. He has installed a winning mentality in the squad, which, on the whole is home grown, more importantly he went back to the basics and made the game simple again. He has taken players like Karl Brown and Steven Croft, who captained the side during Chapples absence, and given them responsibility that has seen them grow in stature, and improve as players. While doing this he has been astute with the players he has brought in, Stephen Moore is a prime example, he has given us the explosive edge to really take hold of games.
From last season I believe that Moores, the team and all of the staff and Lancashire will take huge confidence, too achieve the first championship win in seventy seven years is a huge achievement, the magnitude of which can not be understated. I want to see Moores given further backing to the younger players, yes we all know that Glenn Chapple is still a fantastic player despite his age, and the fact is that he will not be around for ever. This is the year that Moores should say to players like Oliver Newby, take the new ball and show me you deserve to be a regular name on the team sheet. If he can do this, Lancashire will go from strength to strength and have even more success in the coming years.
Padded out a little, still feel there could be more added. Haven't got a clue about the pictures so if someone could lend a hand there I'd be grateful.
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I will take a look at the article and give feedback in a moment, but if you can post a url to the photos here, I will put them in.
Feedback from others appreciated too.
Feedback from others appreciated too.
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https://2img.net/r/ihimg/photo/my-images/440/petermoores.jpg/
https://2img.net/r/ihimg/photo/my-images/201/championsw.jpg/
There you go Adam.
https://2img.net/r/ihimg/photo/my-images/201/championsw.jpg/
There you go Adam.
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biltongbek wrote:I would advise you to beg cricketfan or stella to assist, their knowledge is much broader than mine mate.
You are the Statto of the cricket section!
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hampo171 wrote:Peter Moores the right man for Lancashire?
With the news coming from Old Trafford that Peter Moores has signed a new two year extension to his existing contract, I thought I'd take the chance to look at what Moores has achieved so far.
As a fan of Lancashire for nearly 10 years it has been a tiring time, thinking this could be the year we really make a charge only for the weather put a huge dent in our season. Great players like Peter Martin and Neil Fairbrother, not getting the opportunity to lift the most prestigious trophy in English cricket.
When Moores took over, he was coming away from the England set up, and personally I was concerned that, possibly, he hadn't quite recovered from the set back with England, and the fact it was a player that effectively gave him the boot, led me to question whether he was a good enough man manager for the county scene. I am happy to say that he has proven me wrong.
If we take a look at his time at the helm of the England cricket team, he may have lost four of the seven test match series that he was in charge for, but England where in a rebuilding stage and injuries to key players such as Michael Vaughen didn't help. For a man taking over what was essentially, a mess after Duncan Fletcher left that is a respectable record. He brought new life to the England set up, he brought a fun factor which the player seemed to enjoy. He had laid the foundations for what is now a very successful England team under Andrew Flower, and a lot of credit must go to him for that.
The sacking of Peter Moores told me more about the ECB than Peter Moores himself, it told me that player power was first, second and last, and that the coaches opinion at that time counted for nothing. It was he, who made the decision, along with the selectors to include Darren Pattinson, it was also the same people that believed Steve Harmison was ready for a recall to the test team. Moores alone could not have made the decisions, and in all honesty, is was let down by these people when the issues with Pieterson arose. They should have stood by him, no one man is bigger than the team.
The same zest and energy that he took to the England game was even more invigorated when he took over at Lancashire, the will to win was even stronger and I believe the experience he gained with England has made him one of the best domestic head coaches around today. He has installed a winning mentality in the squad, which, on the whole is home grown, more importantly he went back to the basics and made the game simple again. He has taken players like Karl Brown and Steven Croft, who captained the side during Chapples absence, and given them responsibility that has seen them grow in stature, and improve as players. While doing this he has been astute with the players he has brought in, Stephen Moore is a prime example, he has given us the explosive edge to really take hold of games.
From last season I believe that Moores, the team and all of the staff and Lancashire will take huge confidence, too (to) achieve the first championship win in seventy seven (not sure but should this be written as 77.) years is a huge achievement, the magnitude of which can not be understated. I want to see Moores given further backing to the younger players, yes we all know that Glenn Chapple is still a fantastic player despite his age, and the fact is that he will not be around for ever. This is the year that Moores should say to players like Oliver Newby, take the new ball and show me you deserve to be a regular name on the team sheet. If he can do this, Lancashire will go from strength to strength and have even more success in the coming years.
Padded out a little, still feel there could be more added. Haven't got a clue about the pictures so if someone could lend a hand there I'd be grateful.
good article. i think i spotted one typo too/to. and should seventy seven be written 77 in this case?
only nits to pick. hope you dont mind.
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Yeah it probably should haha! Not at all mate, welcome all feedback as it'll help
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hampo171 wrote:Peter Moores the right man for Lancashire?
With the news coming from Old Trafford that Peter Moores has signed a new two-year extension to his existing contract, I thought I'd take the chance to look at what Moores has achieved so far.
As a fan of Lancashire for nearly 10 years it has been a tiring time, thinking this could be the year we really make a charge only for the weather put a huge dent in our season. Great players, like Peter Martin and Neil Fairbrother, not getting the opportunity to lift the most prestigious trophy in English cricket.
When Moores took over, he was coming away from the England set-up, and personally I was concerned that, possibly, he hadn't quite recovered from the setback with England, and the fact it was a player that effectively gave him the boot led me to question whether he was a good enough man-manager for the county scene. I am happy to say that he has proven me wrong.
If we take a look at his time at the helm of the England cricket team, he may have lost four of the seven test match series for which he was in charge, but England were in a rebuilding stage and injuries to key players such as Michael Vaughan didn't help. For a man taking over what was essentially a mess after Duncan Fletcher left, that is a respectable record. He brought new life to the England set-up, he brought a fun factor which the player seemed to enjoy. He had laid the foundations for what is now a very successful England team under Andrew Flower, and a lot of credit must go to him for that.
The sacking of Peter Moores told me more about the ECB than Peter Moores himself: it told me that player power was first, second and last, and that the coach's opinion at that time counted for nothing. It was he who made the decision, along with the selectors, to include Darren Pattinson; it was also the same people that believed Steve Harmison was ready for a recall to the test team. Moores alone could not have made the decisions, and in all honesty, he was let down by these people when the issues with Pietersen arose. They should have stood by him; no one man is bigger than the team.
The same zest and energy that he took to the England game was even more invigorated (evident?) when he took over at Lancashire, the will to win was even stronger and I believe the experience he gained with England has made him one of the best domestic head coaches around today. He has installed a winning mentality in the squad, which on the whole is home grown; more importantly, he went back to the basics and made the game simple again. He has taken players like Karl Brown and Steven Croft, who captained the side during Chapple's absence, and given them responsibility that has seen them grow in stature and improve as players. While doing this, he has been astute with the players he has brought in: Stephen Moore is a prime example, he has given us the explosive edge to really take hold of games.
From last season I believe that Moores, the team and all the staff at Lancashire will take huge confidence: to have achieved the first championship win in seventy-seven years is a huge achievement, the magnitude of which cannot be overstated. I want to see Moores give further backing to the younger players: yes, we all know that Glenn Chapple is still a fantastic player despite his age, but the fact is that he will not be around for ever. This is the year that Moores should say to players like Oliver Newby: take the new ball and show me you deserve to be a regular name on the team sheet. If he can do this, Lancashire will go from strength to strength and have even more success in the coming years.
Padded out a little, still feel there could be more added. Haven't got a clue about the pictures so if someone could lend a hand there I'd be grateful.
Hi Hampo, I hope you don't mind but I've changed / corrected the odd thing here and there - the only thing I've highlighted is where you've used 'huge' twice in succession.
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Not at all mate, forgot to grammer and spell check it this morning when I added stuff to it in work Hopefully the picture will work this time.
Peter Moores: The right man for Lancashire.
By Paul Hampton.
With the news coming from Old Trafford that Peter Moores has signed a new two-year extension to his existing contract, I thought I'd take the chance to look at what Moores has achieved so far.
As a fan of Lancashire for nearly ten years it has been a tiring time, thinking this could be the year we really make a charge only for the weather put a huge dent in our season. Great players, like Peter Martin and Neil Fairbrother, not getting the opportunity to lift the most prestigious trophy in English cricket.
When Moores took over, he was coming away from the England set-up, and personally I was concerned that, possibly, he hadn't quite recovered from the setback with England, and the fact it was a player that effectively gave him the boot led me to question whether he was a good enough man-manager for the county scene. I am happy to say that he has proven me wrong.
If we take a look at his time at the helm of the England cricket team, he may have lost four of the seven test match series for which he was in charge, but England were in a rebuilding stage and injuries to key players such as Michael Vaughan didn't help. For a man taking over what was essentially a mess after Duncan Fletcher left, that is a respectable record. He brought new life to the England set-up, he brought a fun factor which the player seemed to enjoy. He had laid the foundations for what is now a very successful England team under Andrew Flower, and a lot of credit must go to him for that.
The sacking of Peter Moores told me more about the ECB than Peter Moores himself: it told me that player power was first, second and last, and that the coach's opinion at that time counted for nothing. It was he who made the decision, along with the selectors, to include Darren Pattinson; it was also the same people that believed Steve Harmison was ready for a recall to the test team. Moores alone could not have made the decisions, and in all honesty, he was let down by these people when the issues with Pietersen arose. They should have stood by him; no one man is bigger than the team.
The same zest and energy that he took to the England game was there when he took over at Lancashire, the will to win was even stronger and I believe the experience he gained with England has made him one of the best domestic head coaches around today. He has installed a winning mentality in the squad, which on the whole is home grown; more importantly, he went back to the basics and made the game simple again. He has taken players like Karl Brown and Steven Croft, who captained the side during Chapple's absence, and given them responsibility that has seen them grow in stature and improve as players. While doing this, he has been astute with the players he has brought in: Stephen Moore is a prime example, he has given us the explosive edge to really take hold of games.
From last season I believe that Moores, the team and all the staff at Lancashire will take a lot of confidence: to have achieved the first championship win in seventy-seven years is a fantastic achievement, the magnitude of which cannot be overstated. I want to see Moores give further backing to the younger players: yes, we all know that Glenn Chapple is still a fantastic player despite his age, but the fact is that he will not be around for ever. This is the year that Moores should say to players like Oliver Newby: take the new ball and show me you deserve to be a regular name on the team sheet. If he can do this, Lancashire will go from strength to strength and have even more success in the coming years.
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Anyone else have any feedback? I'm constantly reading over it, and going through different wordings in my head at the moment.
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Looks good to me!
As a rule of thumb (from my English teacher), any number from twelve and under should be written as a word and anything from 13 up should be written in numbers.
As a rule of thumb (from my English teacher), any number from twelve and under should be written as a word and anything from 13 up should be written in numbers.
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I think it looks fine
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I'm happy with this now, if everyone else is can it be moved into the other subsection
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just as a matter of principle, I think we need to keep a copy of it in the finished articles, and then publish a new article in the relevant section (either an admin or the author can do this).
we then put a link to the published article on the thread in the "publsihed section"!
That sounds a lot more complicated than I mean it to be!
we then put a link to the published article on the thread in the "publsihed section"!
That sounds a lot more complicated than I mean it to be!
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