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Electric Demon wrote:I'd just accept my position more if people were actually critical. It might sound bizarre but I'd prefer to read a critique than a cop out.

I know what you mean, I did critique your show a little as I said Matches 2 and 3 seemed to be forced. I'm taking the feedback from Week 4 to push towards the next PPV earlier, and the knock on effect is the matches at the next PPV will have more hype and more of a backstory to make the match more must-see.

thanks for the feedback guys
Glad I got a decent ammount of points as it means I finally put on a show that some of you enjoyed

Electric Demon wrote:I'd just accept my position more if people were actually critical. It might sound bizarre but I'd prefer to read a critique than a cop out.

I don't vote on your write ups so it's hard to call on why, but looking briefly at the PPV I would say that there's just not enough guys in there that people like, it's hard to find yourself being involved in a book for example when the main characters aren't ones you either relate to or want to know what happens to them. They're guys that you don't wither like enough or hate enough so just end up with a more shrug of the shoulders m'eh to them.
That's my view.

Cheers Marky.

Match 1 was - I agree. I didn't have an idea for it, and didn't have time to write it.

Match 2 was royally screwed by Sin Cara being injured twice in three weeks. But I thought the match was good.

I now have the human botch machine ED. I have so much planned for him.

TwisT wrote:I now have the human botch machine ED. I have so much planned for him.

Sin Cara v Rey Mysterio by chance?

Second Last

Based on your short PPV results Nay, I reckon your PPV would have been near the top had we been fortunate enough to see it.

I was glad when I saw it was short because I was fast approaching the deadline and may not have made it

I was really happy with matches i had written and the Steiner match was brutal, but these things happen.

If people can see where i was going from that abridged version at least my story telling is working ok, which is as good a feedback as i can expect.

now for an epic run to second PPV

Glad i could help ED,

Marky wrote:

TwisT wrote:I now have the human botch machine ED. I have so much planned for him.

Sin Cara v Rey Mysterio by chance?

Actually no so ner!

Guys I'm just letting you know that in my show, Team Canada are allowed to work as a team in Freebird Rules, I'm just saying this so for one it allows me to work around any injuries to them and so this weeks show makes sense so nobody decides to mark me down or give negative feedback on this.

Nobody could see Bull having Cena turn heel and join a stable!

I'm sure I saw that sometime else in WWA....

When are my foreign transfer offers getting answered?

Tactics ups

The Creek is up!

Looking to rennovate a little bit for the second half of the season, does anyone know of any TP's that are unattached and would suit my roster, I've got nothing...

I have a couple going up for sale if you want to do deals Sainty

What sort of wrestlers are you after Saint?

Who Twist?

Just after some tidy midcarders, really. My main event scene is pretty solid so want to try and boost the midcard as that's where most my criticism comes from.

I got Road Dogg who is up for sale

show will go up tomro hope thats ok ?

Show up from us, my fault for delay, work let me finish yesterday and get more chance to write there than I do at home

Great show H&K

I've been thinking of a theme for next season, any ideas from people? I want something big like the generations theme from this season.

Cruiser Weight gregers?

I was thinking cruisers and a great women's division.

Cruisers: Rey, Aries, Kendrick, Kidd, London, Shelton, Eddie, Chavo

Women: Trish, Beth, Natalya, Lita, Khama, Mickie

My alternative idea for this season was going to be a diva league, but I just didn't know if people would buy into it.

I'm quite happy with my comments on the Inter-Gender Tag Division

My theme next season is going to be gays and sharks

For those who have not posted their shows yet, could you give a quick estimated time when they will be up, just so people know from a voting aspect.
Cheers

some time today

I hope you don't want an office job Bull

Cactus Jack - where is your page to make bids on?

I want Kofi Kingston

Season 1 I had the Tag Team League, Season 2 a slightly generic Heavyweight and Middleweight division.

Season 3, I have a new idea.

Would anyone be interested in having an interfed war?

i have an Interfed War Marky!

copy righted and trade marketed sorry

LOL Bull I don't think that's what Marky meant by that. For those who are wondering I'll be posting my show in the next couple of hours. Need to write up 2 matches (Not Main Event!) and proof read it all so it makes sence.

I reckon that could be a fantastic idea Marky.

Gav, I'm trying my best to sort out my results for today dude, though I'm fine if I get a penalty for missing the deadline. Is 6 PM fine?

ED/Bull, I have replied to offers.

Jack, there are a couple of other shows still to be posted so that is fine mate

Guys. I've messed up.

I used Booker T but I've sold him - not really going to have time to rewrite a whole match on my phone, so whatever punishment is deemed worthy is unfortunately accepted

Show up guys

Its a bit longer than normal, as i had to get across a few of the PPV points

Hopefully you wont hold that against me

The only punishment is you might get marked down for using a wrestler who isn't yours in the voting.

ED, just say who you would replace him with and we can work off that

As long as booker won't be used next week/has been written out I think its fine.

How would people view a: Mahal vs Hassan feud as a main event

Hindu vs Muslim

Just replaced every mention of Booker with Jimmy Rave

It now makes no booking sense whatsoever, but its not breaking the rules.

Sorry guys. Idiot!

Gregers, do you have Muhammad Hassan now?

Please tell me Jimmy Rave does a spin a roonie.

The fixtures in tooze's league are looking a bit confusing as Jack's original fixtures are obsolete and he has taken over JJ's fixtures. Will sort them out in the morning.

Hero wrote:Please tell me Jimmy Rave does a spin a roonie.

"Can you dig it sucka" hits and the crowd pops as Jimmy Rave hits the ring. Rave looks at his hand and shakes his head as the pyro's go off.

Rave proclaims he is a "five time, five time, five time, five time, five time WCW Champion", then does his trademark Spinaroonie.

show will be up late or tomro sorry