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I need votes on Tooze's league from the following:

HaK
Crimey
ED (already confirmed)

I need votes from nando and nay

So Hero hasn't voted!

I'll vote this morning as he did post the show for me!

Morning guys

Hey Twist, how's it going? .... Anything planned for this weeks tactics yet?

I am waiting for some deals to go through Enigma. Plus Vader is injured this week which has totally blown what I had planned. Looking to do some TP's mid week

You?

Vic Grimes is available.

I am more interested in Yoko KB, but I guess he is not moving

You guess correctly!

You can have him next season.

I thought he would fit in well in my Super Heavyweight Division. I have a few TP's that I can go for. I thinking of going for Kaientai and having them invade your Far East lot in an inter fed angle.

INDEEEEEEED

I really wanted to get Kai En Tai but i couldn't turn them in to badasses.

I can picture it now...

It's Kai En Tai! It's Kai En Tai!

Oh dear god, New Jack has just harpooned them to the side a whale!

I've voted by the way,

Draw's for everyone. Saves reading the shows.

Can't TaKa be dropped from a gantry and re-in-act his rumble exit?

when are results?

tonight hopefully

We want results!
We want results!

(Unless I didn't win, then you can keep them.)

whos results are we waiting for?

Marky i think you won =)

I'll be surprised if you don't get a draw, Bullbo.

Sorry - a load of urgent crap has come up. Don't think I'll be able to read the shows.

I will read them tomorrow out of pure desire, but I abstain from voting and take my punishment accordingly

Sorry folks

really KB?

now that demon cant vote , how many votes we wanting for?

I have all mine apart from nando's I will sort them once YI is about

Im here, Tooze, lets sort them

right, will get to it now

Woo!!

Tooze's League Week 6 Results

6wE v T.P.W.F
Winner - TPWF

As per usual Mark tells a great story and produces great matches week in and week out. But this week seemed a
little strange. First of David Arguette has no place being in a wrestling ring and could never picture him
competeing in a tag team match, second of all the debut of Maven was very strange and has no connection to either
of the guys so this will be interesting where this goes next. I wasn't sold on the Batista debut either, I don't
understand why this guy would come for Chavo when there are bigger and better guys he could have worked with.
Again I'm willing to see how this pans out but I wouldn't have had him anywhere near a middlewight championship
match up. There needs to be segments included to link up everything. It would also help the characters to come across
more with what they are doing.
The main event really got the show back on track, a very well written match with it being something
I'd be interested in seeing. I enjoyed the debut of Morishima and would be interested in seeing something with him
& Punk. It all sets up nicely for a Christian V Edge down the line somewhere.

I thought Bull's show was a mixed bag this week. Some parts of the show were brilliant whilst other parts seemed
strange and made you question why that had happened. The main event didn't appeal to me at all, I thought Hogan
was fired yet he appears on the next very show! I also don't understand why Undertaker was advertised as the
mystery wrestler, he's on the roster so why's it a mystery? Now the posititves. The debut of Jake Roberst was very w
well done and made a very good reading, I also enjoyed the attacking with Finlay where Kane still came across strong
and for that I'll be interested in why he attacked him. With the second half of the season being show short, I'd hate
to see it be a last minute thing as to what happens next with the Vince/Eric storyline

6WE: Another good show from Marky. Liked the way you used your draft picks and the history between Punk and Morishima. One criticism, and a big one, is that after all the fuss you made with Christian at the PPV and then there is no mention of him and no party as stated.

TPWF: Great show, and my fave of the week. A brilliant turn around from Bull. The Cena angle is great. Like the fact that Kane is just doing what he wants and the Taker/Sting feud has a twist that I didn’t expect with Sting using Takers moves and persona. Keep it up mate.

TPWF is probably the most improved fed. Heel Cena is a win and the storylines are very well thought out.
T.P.W.F.'s show was ok, but lacked direction in places, the Undertaker section for instance could have been done better. 6wE was a very strong show overall with good quality matches throughout.
PWF - Excellent show, probably the one show i'd choose as my favourite to read every week, and I look forward to seeing how it develops with the main event scene and the Sting/Taker stuff, another decent feud in the midcard would top the show off IMO.

nXtreme v WWF
Winner - nXtreme

Credit to WWF who are working on limit resources with their roster. In what was a very good opening show I could
see better talent there who should be in front of Drew to hold the world title, It will be interesting to see how
well he is booked holding the title.I also think that apart from the likes of Storm & Malenko the show lacks a real
babyface to challanege for the title in what is a very dominant heel roster. The tried and tested Anti-USA heel always draws to the crowd but throwing
Hassan & ADR together could be a master stroke. I can't wait to see how this storyline deveolps. Overall the
segments were very well written and came across well it was a very good opening show

A interesting show from nXtreme this week. The matches were limited which I felt effected the show slightly but
was still a strong card with the help of some excellent segments. I'm sold on the mystery voice storyline I can't
really figure out who it could be which is always a good thing.

was very close but thought the main event had more of a hype in NXT and very much liked the ending with Orton spitting on Cody.
WWF was very good as well looking forward to where Drew will go as champion.

nXtreme: Another really great show from Gregers and he continually keeps this concept moving from strength to strength.

WWF: Good show from Jack, not easy taking on a roster this late on and making your own stamp. Didn’t see the ending coming which I liked, but Gregers is on top form so only one winner here.

OVW v MWF
Winner - MWF

I feel for fernando this week. Even though it was a very breif show this week I had just enough info to piece
together what was happening in the show. Having read it I can only wish to have seen this in its full lenght.
The Steen/Odnan feud continues to go strenght to strenght. I think he would have possibly earned more points this
week with the main event. A fantastic way to debut El Genenrico & Roderick Strong & Davey Richards and can't wait
to read how this feud developes. The only issue I had was with DDP attacking Colt Cabana it just didn't seem to fit
but apart from that it would have been a great show to read!

I thought this week was arguably Tooze's strongest shows. I'm not really a fan of having a themed show such as a
having the entire card as a extreme night. I have enjoyed the Zak Knight/Juve feud right from the off and has been
my favoutre midcard feud of the entire season! I thought that the match was a pefect way to cap off the storyline.
It's a real beliveable push with Paul Birchill even though he wouldn't fit in any other fed's main event scene is
fits in real well and perhaps could be in line for a title shot which with the right booking would make a good match.

liked the surprise with Burchill. OVW looking forward to seeing Richards enter the Main event!

MWF: Great show, and great use of the indy talents and the history between them. Really enjoyed it.

OVW: Not much to say really.

NWO v T-League
Winner - NWO

A very short card this week and few matches which dissapointed me a little this week. The segments really supported
and carried the show which were very well written and added to the storylines. I'm also emjoying the way Danielson is being booked
and hopefully will get involved with Angle leading to the next PPV.

A strong card by NWO who finally got to showcase their tag team talent! A very good and different idea holding
the match in a elmination chamber, the first ever tag version and the first ever in WWA! The Ric/Scott storyline
continues to impress me, It's been built up superbly and can't wait to see how it pans out.

was close but thought the Main event for NWO was better. but am looking forward to Bryan v Angle!

T-League: Good solid show, liked the main event but not keen on HBK/HHH, think it mirrors real life at the moment so lacks that impact.

NWO: Good show, nice to see others making good use of a roster that doesn’t have many star names, especially focusing on the tag division.

Thanks alot guys! =)

just need the table to be updated YI.

Well done Bull.

thanks KB mate , really enjoyed your show !

S.C.W. vs Y.I.M.C.A.
Winner- YIMCA

Loving the evil YIMAN bits of YIMCA. Liking the booking of Sheamus in SCW. Very close match.
S.C.W. was a good event, however lacked a great main event. Y.I.M.C.A. however had a top class main event and a good opening match, even if the two other matches weren't brilliant.
I would not have booked Abyss to lose in a hardcore match (his staple match) to Ziggler. I am not sure how convincing that would have been. However, I really enjoyed Jericho v Edwards main event. The ending for SCW seems all too familar, and I think it is damaging for Goldberg to only appear at the end (again) and spear everyone is sight.
SCW - A great show, Saint seems to have upped his game this week after the PPV's, very good debut of the Boogeyman, a better midcard than in recent weeks and a very well done squash match between Sheamus and Trent Baretta.
YIMCA - Very good show, great matches, really liked Ziggler v Abyss, a big main event and a great debut at the end of AJ Styles. Very impressive show.


H & K Wrestling v LWWF
Winner-H&K

FEM is brilliant as is all of H&K atm
Although H&K lacks the star power of certain other feds, it more than makes up with it with good storylines, and that helps to keep the show enthralling.
No tactics submitted by Crimey. Very enjoyable show by H & K again though. I am a really big fan of Yoko so I hope he stays at the front of the rising East
H&K - Great show, great continuation of storylines.


D.C.W. vs KOTR Wrestling
Winner- KOTR Wrestling

Liked both shows, KOTR just edges it. Feel DCW needs an extra something but can't quite put my finger on what. KOTR's main event was very very good.
A good show from D.C.W. even though it lacked the star power of some other federations. KOTR was a superb show all around however with interesting turns and a superb main event.
I was not that blown away by KOTR's main event, and believe Joe and Swagger should have been higher up the card. DCW has gone from strength to strength, and I am starting to warm to the Heath Slater stuff. I think Shamrock v Henry could be epic.
DCW - Very enjoyable show, really enjoyable main event and a genuinely believeable main event with Mark Henry and Ken Shamrock becoming the focal point. Up against a very tough opponent this week though.
KOTR - Excellent show, excellently written, loved the Steel Cage match.

Thanks to those that have feedback to us!

suprised with my feedback and result so thanks guys. MWF is on the up.

Thanks for feedback guys

Glad the Main event was worth the wait ha ha

I think it is damaging for Goldberg to only appear at the end (again) and spear everyone is sight.

How exactly would you like to see him booked??

Reading poetry in the ring?

Promoing through the medium of interpretive dance?

I'm trying to stick to what he's good at and get criticised for it. As for not having a good main event, whoever commented with that clearly can't grasp storyline progression. Granted, it's not a star studded affair but in terms of the storyline and JL pushing a heel champion and to make him look strong, it did it's job and in my eyes, booking it, it was just as effective.

I can't help but feel that sometimes the feedback doesn't correlate with the story's that I'm trying to articulate.

TheBrahmaBull wrote:Thanks alot guys! =)

just need the table to be updated YI.

The tables were all up to date prior to these results. Wont have time to do them tonight, but im sure you can add 3 to your current points.

No they cant, the maths thread has been removed

And on that note im offskies till tomorrow. Have a good one.

ha ha, have a good one

Well done Bull, I had a feeling it wouldn't be my week. Throroughly deserved mate.

Although to clarify my feedback;

Maven and Simon Dean were a short lived tag team on Smackdown.
Batista attacked Chavo for reasons unknown. It happens in wrestling. But it will lead to a Batista/Guerrero feud with it being a simple way to get the Middleweight Title off Chavo while keeping him strong.
Christian's party never got started as Edge and CM Punk interrupted.
Week 7 has more segments, to break up the show, hopefully it comes across better.

Don't get me wrong, I appreciate the feedback as it helps me make 6wE better, but I just wanted to answer the points.

Well done Enigma

Very pleased with my feedback

cheers Marky mate , i thought your show was very very good as well and thought i would lose to you.

A bit surprised I won but glad people are liking the direction of my shows

I can't really drop the HBK/HHH stuff now that I have got so far into it

TwisT wrote:I can't really drop the HBK/HHH stuff now that I have got so far into it

My feedback was about it mirroring real life.

Is anyone else struggling to squeeze everything in to the next 2 shows?

No.

I just want to draw mine to a death in the next show.

You're going to kill someone? Is it Slater? That would be an epic twist.

The next show is going to read like a mental breakdown

The plans I have for it are drawn from both the epic and the ridiculous

Have you lost the will to live?

No,

I'm just acting upon the feedback "Feel DCW needs an extra something but can't quite put my finger on what" - which is helpful.

But I have figured out what the "what" is.

And it's a revolution in wrestling.

Oh god.....