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I hope you guys like this one, my previous two rugby articles didn't seem to have hit the spot.

I saw on cricinfo that Vernon Philander is currently the most viewed player on their website so thought it might attract more viewers to V2Journal and ultimately bring more posters.

A good read Biltong, and a nice invitation to debate at the end.

Quickly, is it "Supersport", "SuperSport" or "Super Sport"?

it landed short of a length around middle and off and then went away, the delivery pacier than the previous

pacier doesn't quite read right to me, just use quicker/faster?

Fast forward to the rain affected 2nd test at the basin reserve in Wellington New Zealand, it is the afternoon session on the 26th of March of day 4, Philander to Bracewell,he takes wicket No.50, short of a good length outside off, Bracewell hung his bat out loosely as he wasn't sure about playing or leaving and got an inside edge onto the stumps.

missing space, but as it's a long sentence maybe also re-punctuate as

Fast forward to the rain affected 2nd test at the basin reserve in Wellington New Zealand; it is the afternoon session on the 26th of March of day 4: Philander to Bracewell; he takes wicket No.50, short of a good length outside off. Bracewell hung his bat out loosely as he wasn't sure about playing or leaving and got an inside edge onto the stumps.

It took Vernon Philander a 135 days, 7 tests and 206.4 overs to take his 50th wicket. The joint second fastest in history, the fastest to 50 wickets for a 116 years.

- change the first "a" to "just", lose the 2nd.

Cheers Kiwi, not sure where all those "a" came from.

I made the changes as you suggested.

biltongbek wrote:Cheers Kiwi, not sure where all those "a" came from.

I made the changes as you suggested.

Cool. We'll leave it here for the day in case some spots something I've missed, and tomorrow I'll see about publishing it with some nice pics as a "player profile" piece

Glenn McGrath has two 'n's' at the end of Glenn.

Good stuff Biltong, but I do hope you aren't suggesting Mr Philander has passed the unrivalled swing bowling genius of James Anderson?

I would not dream of suggesting that Fists.

I'll add the NN now thanks.