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Lets do the time warp again...

It's just a jump to the left

can I just check - were there only 4 matches in Toozes league this week?

should be 3 matches adam so presuming you mean shows Sainty/Crimeys are due up this evening i believe

My show for next week will be up tonight or tomorrow night

Yeah, sorry, will make sure my show is up by tonight.

Will do my votes tomorrow afternoon if I can. If not they will have to be late Wednesday evening, proper late

I've finally got my show up.

I'll be posting my other show tonight as well as I will be away from tomorrow until Tuesday and then away again from Wednesday to Saturday.

Sorry but I am out for most of the night, so I will pick winners and then do feedback tomorrow afternoon probably. Sorry, will post my feedback on here when it's done

Votes sent Nando. As said earlier, will give feedback on here when I have the time tomorrow

Will get mine over before midday.

My votes will be in mid-morning, just going to clear my desk. Not literally, the PC is on it, and I need that to vote.

Is it results day?

yup

Still waiting for Adam's Results then they will go up

i will post nandos league results when i get home tonight between 7 and 8 ish as out for tea after work

Come all ye faitfhul!

Slightly my fault in the hold up, posting the show late. Illness and work restricted my writing time.

I heard about your illness Saint.
Bone disease isn't it?

Bone fricking idle!

It's hard admitting to it...

Hopefully I'm on the road to recovery!!

You watching Summerslam?

I think I'm going to stream it...

Dunno if I want to pay 15 quid for the card they have put together for it...

Are you?

I don't care how you're watching it boy
Do I look like a policeman?
I want to know if you are watching it?
I am - I'm going to buy it tonight so I can't back out!

Odds are I'll cave and buy it on the night.

Are you doing that chat box that all the kids are doing these days?

I will be Demon. Bet that's put you right off

Depends how I'm viewing it, I will if I buy it, but if I'm streaming probably not.

Olly wrote:I will be Demon. Bet that's put you right off

Yep

Electric Demon wrote:

Olly wrote:I will be Demon. Bet that's put you right off

Yep

Harsh but fair. But Bull might be on the box. Do it for Bull

Olly wrote:

Electric Demon wrote:

Olly wrote:I will be Demon. Bet that's put you right off

Yep

Harsh but fair. But Bull might be on the box. Do it for Bull

I was joking when I said YOU put me off.

But now you really have put me off

Electric Demon wrote:

Olly wrote:

Electric Demon wrote:

Olly wrote:I will be Demon. Bet that's put you right off

Yep

Harsh but fair. But Bull might be on the box. Do it for Bull

I was joking when I said YOU put me off.

But now you really have put me off

Yeah poor Brah. He is a funny old boy. Mood swings like a women as well

They're usually good banter for the PPV's.

Similarly to Saint, if I'm streaming it I won't chatbox it as it'd slow my internet down having two tabs open. Plus the stream is usually behind TV and things get spoiled!

Eh my internet is so bad I am quite far behind, so I get it spoiled and then watch it on stream

To be honest, I tried it during Royal Rumble, and I felt a bit annoyed at the end that I'd paid £15 and only given it half of my attention.

So at WM, I only logged on for 1 minute after Slater got dropped by Florida

My internet's so far behind that I've only just seen The Rock get levelled by an Attitude Adjustment... Please tell me he The Rock didn't lose?!

Who the frig is Antonio Cesaro?

Tooze league results


NCWF 4-2 VWE - NCWF Wins

NCWF Feedback!
Fantastic show from NCWF - very well written, great storyline building. Nothing to fault at all.
I'd probably go as far as saying NCWF was my favourte show this week! The writing & the detail was fantastic and really help every single storyline along this week. I can't quite work out Seth Rollins which is what I like, looks like he's out for himself teasing a turn on Swagger. The debut of the Kliq was well done and something i never saw coming. The segments were also written amazingly again making the most focusing on the current feuds. For me NCWF's best show of the season.
NCWF: Wolfpack suprised me a whole lot, Like the bully ray involvement but i have a feeling that is secondary now. TBH i feel like Piper is a bit much in the ME, swagger v barret interests me but Piper is a bit...eh.
Lynn vs Pillman would be the must see match - I would love to see. NCWF also had an excellent cliffhanger with the nWo going up against the Young Bloods.








VWE Feedback
VWE -solid show and well constructed. Suffered from not having Aries on the show as the main event then seemed less important to me.
As always a well written, consistent show with lots of detail in what was a good solid card on paper. I honestly think the feuds could have an extra dimention by having a segement to beef up the show, and from the 4 matches, 3 contained run-ins or interfearence of some kind which seems a tad repetative. Now, I am really looking forward to seeing how the Storm/Roode storyline pans out in the coming weeks, the I Quit match could steel the show! Credit to the roster you have put together as in all was a very strong card.
VWE: This is Heel Advantage week, no face actually came out on top in a segment and that kinda irks me a little.
VWE's tag division is the stand out tag division in the league. VWE had great storylining throughout, particularly with Estrada and Umaga. And Lesnar vs Lashley is mouth watering.

sorry for holding everyone up this week.

Results are in (as can be seen!)

SCW 3-2-1 MWF - SCW Wins

MWF Feedback
MWF - matches very well written but the show really suffered from having no in between segments. It really hurt the development of the feuds.
A lot better from Tooze this week. That litle bit more detail added gave the show a lot more dimension. Nice to see Heyman make his return and was a good twist putting Corino against his ex-partner. If played out right the Corino/Haymen storyline could carry the rest of the show. Again, offers a wide range of matches but feel that adding that 5th match would swing most voters. I'm also worried about the lack of segment between matches.
MWF: I enjoyed the matches but imo the story didn't move that much this week compared to previous weeks.
MWF still suffers from lack of star-power, though I loved Heyman's Jools Holland-esque entrance.

SCW Feedback
SCW - Once again a short show with the matches not as good. However the show felt more of a complete package due to the in between segments. Close win for Snake City
I don't know what to make of the show from SCW this week. In parts it was brilliant but lacked any real imagination in others. First off, Really into the Orton/Hart feud, working well so far. The push for Ciampa continues to impress as he's now a legit main eventer in my eyes! Also nice to see Sainty work 2 feuds into the tag match with Ritchie getting a rub of the green. Negative points, Would like to see just a tad more detail in the match-ups. I also think with having 6 matches this week it was sufficated without any segments to break it up. I'd also like to see The Rock involved more, could have done without either match 2 or 4 in my eyes, but again as always a solid show from the
champ.
SCW: This was a standard show, the storylines were advanced but I didn't really get anything out of them that made me think, the match that stood out was Hart v Macintyre
Hart vs Orton would be one hell of a feud. I feel something has to happen with Ryback immediately with not much time left this season, rather than his usual WWE squash matches

Nxtreme 2-2-2 TAWA - Draw

nXtreme Feeback
Still loving the Queen focus, and the Suicide vs Daniels angle - expecting a big twist out of that one. Though I feel the Guerreros and Rey and Cara stuff is a bit obvious, and I would hate to see matches with that combination of individuals. It would be a bore.
NXT: Very solid show as Daniels go one step further ( just outta curiousity gonna change Daniels move names because of this?) and the women are telling a good story!
As always, a perfectly written show from Gregers & nXtreme. We'll kick off with the good points. The Daniels storyline continues to lure me in as to what happens next. His promo's and matches are gold, I hope you can keep it up until the PPV. I'm really starting to get into JBL's character now, it's a little edgey and a little rasist but that makes him a top heel! Most of the matches put together wouldn't look out of place on anybody's dream cards. Now, the bad points. 4 of the 5 matches had interfearance of some kind, need a bit of variation next time Gregers! I'd also like to see him mix it up a little and have either the luchadors or the X-Divison guys headline the show for once, perhaps
a title match instead of the Divas every week. Apart from that a very solid show.
NxTreme - I found it hard to believe that daniels could dominate Monty but hey ho - this is wrestling! Another great show and I found it impossible to split these two. The Daniels storyline is my favourite though!



TAWA Feedback
I think the Jobbers Championship in TAWA is a superb idea, and TAWA had brilliant matches throughout - would have been an enjoyable show to watch.
TAWA: Cena interests me as his attitude is new and interesting for him, Doink winning is fun ( personal but not influential note, no Stump Puller or Whoopie Cushion? aww) liked the stories being told. The one downside is cenas winning way...i like the fact hes all buisness but the 5 moves of doom?
Good range of matches and decent card from TAWA this week. The Jobbers title is hilarious but quite suprized to see Quackenbush in there. Good/different approach with Cena, Enjoyed reading his promo to kick off the show, though I'm hoping he doesn't keep up his super Cena routine. Enjoying the Hart/Beniot feud which is brewing up superbly. Felt a little let down on how Anderson had the night off without much explanation but apart from that, as always a good show in what has been a good series!
tawa - love the idea of the jobbers championship. Brilliant show again with every feud incredibly interesting. One of 3 great shows this week.

Just to clarify, I know my matches were short but with work and being ill I had no time to really give it the attention it deserved. Thanks for the feedback though, although whoever keeps saying I need segments, I suggest you re-read, every show I've written has segments in.

Sainty wrote:Just to clarify, I know my matches were short but with work and being ill I had no time to really give it the attention it deserved. Thanks for the feedback though, although whoever keeps saying I need segments, I suggest you re-read, every show I've written has segments in.

This comment needs segments

Damnit!!!!

Sainty wrote:Damnit!!!!

as does this :P

You whine when you lose and then you whine when you win Sainty.
You're like an itchy minge

I wasn't whining!

Just noticed that one recurring thing every time I get feedback.

Nando League Results

Loophole 3 CSWDW 3

Progression of storylines was again excellent by CSWDW and it will always entertain me and make me laugh. LCW is getting better but it still feels a bit muddled feud-wise aside from the main event which I have consistently said is excellent. If the undercard gets ordered it will be much better.

LCW: Uryu's best show so far by quite a distance but there a still a few things that hurt it. Such as Goldberg being dominated by midcarders and opening the show with the divas after they've been an afterthought throughout. The Kane storyline is comfortably the best thing going for it but Uryu continues to be hurt by his limited roster although he is dealing with it as best as he can.
CSWDW: Underneath all the layers of Catchyness, Sexyness, Wittyness and Delightfullness the show is actually one that I would want to watch. It genuinely makes me laugh and the storylines are some of the best in the entire WWA.

Not the best show from either this week but good building blocks towards bigger storylines. The matches in LCW weren't too bad but the idea of two mintue matches put me off, and the ending of the show wasn't a huge shock. CSDW didn't have a great lower-card with mainly just the usual comedic elements, but the main event was impressive so that's what gets it my vote this week.

I thought both shows had their positives and negatives. Against any other show, both would have probably lost. LCW was marginally better as it didn't have the singing.


Hokori Pro 4 Bum Fights 2

Hokori have a good show this week, and the ending was very well done. I am a fan of London/Kendrick starting to fall apart a little bit and I look forward to seeing where it goes. Bum Fights is solid as always, and I still love Steiner. I don’t know why but the ending didn’t really do it for me, but I am keen to see Jake Roberts get his revenge.

Hokori: Steen vs El Generico is an interesting move and I love that outside of Angle Hokori has very few genuine big names. Enigma is a master of writing shows that I love and this week was no exception. I physically am struggling to decide this match.
Bumfights: In the week that the two heavyweights collide and they couldn't have made it any harder! The attack on the snake was both shocking and absolute genius. Sensational once more from Hobo.

Two great shows. I know it has been said before but Hokori Pro is probably still a bit too long which means it drags a bit. BFP have the best stories in WWA, but Hokori Pro had what would have been better matches. BFP just about wins.

Two very good shows this week, but I feel that Hokori Pro edges it. BFP was good, but I felt that bringing in Shamrock to then have him lose was an odd decision, and the ending was way to over the top for me. Hokori Pro however had very good matches and feuds built up all the way through the show, and the debut at the end was done spectacularly.


OVW 3 NCWF 3

NCWF left a good ending to deal with next week, but the rest of their show felt flat as the two factions stayed away from each other. OVW was good, and Tensai being moved up is a good thing in my opinion.

NCWF: Too many title matches this week for me, its a weekly show and if you think along those lines there would not be 3 title matches! Everything else on the show was very very good though and the two fed angle is something I love. Very strong finish as well as Hunter vs Austin appears to be getting even more personal!
OVW: The build up of Tensai has been genius by Nando and much much better than the botch job WWE did! Taker vs Del Rio(?) should be fantastic and Edge vs Bryan was already brilliant and now we have Tensai in there as well?! I cannot wait! OVW is the darkhorse for a place in the semi's in my eyes.

A big fan of NCWF which has big names in big stories which is great, OVW is a good solid show but lacks the big names to keep me interested. Great twist at the end in NCWF, doing something different with Austin.

OVW this week was a relatively short show, not in terms of the ammount written, but the size of card. The double booking of Tensai also hurt it slightly I feel, as made Bryan and Edge look weak coming out of the event. NCWF has given another good show this week with the NCWF vs ITWC feud heating up nicely. The ending of the show was a little daring, but if Olly can write it as well as he has done previously, it should be great for the storyline.

Sainty wrote:I wasn't whining!

Just noticed that one recurring thing every time I get feedback.

like me and a few trades...