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At least i didn't come last

4 7's and a 6, chuffed with that!

Quite surprised I got a 7 (I will release your mother now you've voted )

Uryu, you weren't last for everyone, and to be fair the standard in the WWA is ridiculously higher than before, I won my league Season 2, i'll be lucky to be anything above mid table this time around and my shows are better this time IMO!

heck I took a gamble on my ending n it didnt seem to pay off

It was an odd ending to say the least, but you had nothing to lose if you expected to be last anyway, keep going with it. And wait for feedback before assuming the worst

Is there a show due this week or is it a week off post ppv?

im gunna let people take the week off mainly due to it be after ppv so gives people time to do some trading before next shows

Any chance of feedback?

FEED ME FEEDBACK

FEED ME SMORES

Feedback will be done tomorrow unless Tooze does it before i get in

nando please leave

PWI Feedback

PWI – Great show, very solid throughout, terrific main event to boot. Hard to give feedback for a show so good.

2) PWI
Sensational from enigma as usual. The different angle the ppv took was a breath of fresh air

*Good opener and nice way of making Fish look credible
*In terms of if these were real, I would order this PPV above all others
*Backstage segments build every feud fantastically
*I like the tension left after the main event
*Is there any criticism, I can’t think of any.

A decent show yet after the Main Event it just seemed flat.

XPW

great show, was looking forward to the main event featuring Steen and Joe, not so hot on a Tensai v Lesnar one on one match although Steen and Joe still look strong without losing.

I cannot wait to sewn how nando builds up someone to oppose lesnar

*Enjoyed the show, good matches that gave everyone on the roster a good build.
*Didn’t like the lack of buildup for the main event
*Main event climax was well written

XPW - Tensai was not winning this at all, but Generico winning is a +

XPW - Explosive opener with all 4 men coming out strong. The show overal all had a stacked card with every match
must see, The main event sounded brutel, it's a shame that Tensai isn't booked like this IRL. There's still questions
to be asked with the masked men reviling themselves in what will lead to an interesting second half of the season.

FTCW

FTCW – Decent show, unique ending with the crowd fighting but I’m not sure where it could head. Wasn’t a star studded main event to begin with, but great effort from Uryu.

I enjoyed ftcw's ppv on the whole but didn't enjoy the end of the main event as it didn't really make sense to me. Where was the world champion as well at the show end?

*Interested to see the Divas division building, was a good touch from Uryu.
*Henry’s 100ft drop really was ridiculous if I am honest
*The ending to the show made no sense to me at all, think Uryu has good points to his fed but the attempts to shock just seem way over the top.

The PPV had it's good points and bad. Now, the ladder match was a real highlight! The 4 Corner tag macth with
the inclusion of the commentators was a sprizing twist making the show interesting. The last man standing match also
sounded brutel. The main event strangly let down the show, I'm not sure what to make of the ending as it just simply
feels like it's been thrown out the window. Apart from that very enjoyable show

MWF

Good matches, good segments, good ending. Seemed like a good PPV, by which I mean it took no risks, did exactly what it set out to do. Not enthralling but good.


A great show from tooze, the main event has my intruiged and there is a good build up in the mid card

*Every match had terrific storytelling, could see myself watching each one.
*Thought there could have been more buildup to each match but that is a minor complaint.
*Had a feeling the Tajiri swerve was coming but was still done well, looking forward to how it develops.
*Tooze is really on a par with Gregers when it comes to Divas writing, I think that deserves good credit.

MWF - Enjoyable show, although breif, the show got across the action! I'm growing to like Spud's character with the
storyline and X-Divison championship leaving questions. The main event had a suprizing ending with Tajiri turning
on his long time friend, looking forward to see where this goes.

nXtreme

Great show, terrific throughout and a great shock ending as well. Heel Cena should be entertaining, and Lashley looked outrageously strong.

*Fast paced opening and the time given to Drew was fantastic, looks like a star is in the making.
*Gregers gets me every time with his writing of the Queen’s Division, if he was in charge of WWE’s Divas division then I would definitely watch it.
*The tension built through the show in regards to Goldberg and the hooded group was brilliant, that is how you put over a serious threat.
*You want a Cena heel turn the here it is, very well executed.
*I have no real criticism to make, a little short for a PPV but the matches were very good.

Short card, with one match being a sqaush match. The whole show was very much based around the main event,
which was excellent to read! Loved the heel turn of Cena and where this goes from here. There's still so many questions
to be asked going forward, I can't wait to see what path this takes...

BWF

Ppv of the week, loved the big feel of it. Stunning writing.

*Every match had good build up and there was a definite PPV feel
*Still wasn’t a fan of the Hell in a Cell match but the Clay swerve was cool and the HBK entrance was a mark out.
*Nice twist with the co-champions at the end and think Marky achieved a lot from this PPV
*If I was to criticise I would say that perhaps the “Why so Serious” feud could have been built better, although I am looking forward to HBK/Sting.

BWF - Good all-round PPV from Marky! The entire card has a story tell and have been well built over the last couple
of weeks. Loving the Storm/Roode angle, I have no idea where it goes now but has me hooked! The Sheamus/Christian
match was a great opener in what was a pro hardcore show. Didn't really like the ending of the PPV, but sets up a
perfect storyline going forward.

CWF

CWF – Brilliant and captivating show, love the main event despite how long it is, Raven looks the f*cking man! Great work.

Interesting show from JJ, how he continues to keep ECW vs cwf fresh will be the key

CWF - WOW, top and bottom fantastic PPV. Every single match has a background to it and they all deleivered. The
opening match was creative and really gave a tone for the rest of the show. There was so much detail, I really did
enjoy reading each match. Raven on top leads to an exicting second half of the season. Only comment is toning down
muiltple segments between each match.

ASWF

ASWF - Nothing wrong with the PPV, the 2 Main events delivered and were well built throughout the night.
Only suggestion for Nick going forward, I'd like to see something different in the characters of your roster,
Move away from their WWE gimmicks and have something original. I didn't really under stand the Chair thing with
Beniot, but the main event was great, and the feud has been set between Eddie/Beniot.

A solid show that needed just a little more

*Lack of build up to certain matches hurt this show
*Don’t think the hell in a cell gimmick added anything to HHH/Orton and think it could have been done better.
*I do like the attention that was put on the main event throughout the show
*I thought the Benoit/Guerrero feud would be for the title so was surprised that Bryan won the main event, but was a fair effort by Nick.
*I would say maybe put as much effort in in the lower card as the main event and more points will be gained.

I liked the mid card however I felt that Orton via hunter wasn't big enough, maybe writing one of them out would have worked? Benoit vs Guerrero I am looking forward to, where Bryan goes in feuds is uncertain.

ASWF – Great effort from Nick, the matches were great and a great ending to the main event, only bugbear is the Hell in a Cell match being before the Divas match, but that’s only a minor point.

the following people can leave XPW

Jay Lethal
Conor O'Brian
Low Ki
Zema Ion
Kazarian
Chris Hero (for ridiculous deal)
Nigel McGuinness
Ryback

Breaking my own slience here...

anybody up for any deals this week? Looking to freshen up my roster a little by adding/swapping 1 or 2 people.

my show will proberly be up tommorow as been up hospital all day so not really in a writing mood tonight

Yep my show will be up tonight, tooze and nando granted me permission in the chatbox last night

Got called into work unexpectedly, will do my absolute best to get the show up tonight, but if not ill 100% have it up by tomorrow lunch time.

Sorry for the inconvenience

Nick, just do an abridged version, short results or something. Better than nothing

show up

Show FINALLY done.

Votes sent to Tooze and Nando. Hope everyone else has theirs in asap seeing as we're a week behind!

Can we get this week's injuries sorted please Nando/Tooze? Votes are now sent too!

Votes will be done this evening

Was going to ask the same Enigma, have taken the risk of already starting to write my show!

done

Cheers. And I mean that, despite you injuring AJ Styles!

Votes will be done before im asleep tonight.

Will get votes done in a bit lads

So we get nearly/all results in for results & feedback day?

I have everyones but Nick and Tooze's (presuming he has them)

Results for this week

Nxtreme 2-1-3 CWF
BWF 2-4 XPW
PWI 4-2 FTCW
MWF 4-2 ASWF

I sent my votes to tooze nando

Another defeat

I know otherwise results wouldn't be up now

Your getting closer though

I will do feedback later on although their isn't much as most have had a busy week

I've got back to you on a offer Nando, please take a look

does that mean me v nick will be 3-3?

you what?

Can I ask why someone is voting for draws this season?

Isn't it vote for the winner?

i voted for the draw because i couldnt seperate the shows

ive no issue with people voting for draw provided it's a last resort and really can't separate them

nXtreme
nXtreme - In terms of storyline wise, the progression is clear to see. I'm liking the push and direction of Drew in the Factor League. Cena's stable continues to be the main focus dictating the show. Only comment I'd like to make is maybe seeing more out of the midcarder, perhaps a gimmick match/triple threat to mix things up slightly, but apart from that a solid, consistant show.

nXtreme - great follow up to the PPV, enjoyed the Cena segment before the main event and some solid foundations for the next few weeks.

NXT: A very strong show again, wondering who the hero is because knowing Gregers it can be ANYONE!

CWF
CWF - Really enjoyed the show this week, it had that PPV vibe and callaber right from the opening promo. The stable wars is continuing to heat-up after the nexus style attacks from "N.W.D" which I'm hoping to see a big Pay off come PPV time. Only comment to make was there was a few to many run-ins during the matches.

CWF - great show, very dramatic ending and the most important thing is it leaves the reader wanting more and wanting next week's show. Great job.

CWF: The ending was inevitable but pulled of very well. What happens next week?

BWF
BWF - Again another very short show, without a lot of detail/action in the match-card. Stacked card throughout highlighting the star power, It was good to see the Punk/ADR storyline progression forcing them to tag together.

BWF: Storms return was a suprise and i'm curious about next weeks triple threat. Odd placing Santino in a match though.

XPW
XPW - I was looking forward to the aftermatch after a successfull PPV. The match card, top to bottom was excellent, but I can't help but feel short changed as each match had very breif details. However, the turn of El Generico is intriging, so I can't wait to see how that develops. On the whole a steady show, with plenty of questions to be answered going into next weeks show.

XPW: Generico turning heel was awesome. As is the looney Russo with abuse of power.

Both cracking shows, but markys storyline involving the title is really impressive and i am enjoying it an awfull lot. Nando show was very decent though

MWF
MWF - Enjoyed the show this week, althought it was only a 4 match card. Enjoyed the detail of the hard-hitting, brutal hardcore match-up. Main event, was again another hard-hitting contest with the storyline moving along nicely. It will be good to see how the hardcore/cage match pans out on next weeks show.

MWF - great show, good matches and good segments, maybe another match could have been written to utilise the rest of the roster but that's a minor point. Builds very nicely for the next few weeks.

MWF: Another solid show. Hardcore match is solid

ASWF
ASWF - I'm seeing big improvements in Nick's shows as the season charges on. Very good card with a good amount of detail on the midcarders. Eddie Guerrero's debut and booking was fine with a strong outing, and it's nice to see Orton's being kept fresh moving on to the title scene. Keep up the work Nick and you'll soon start picking up more points.

ASWF - loved this show, it seems like Nick's picking up on the feedback and is turning it into a better show week by week. D-Bry being the focal point of the show and the show having a beginning, middle and end with him involved were my personal favourites.

ASWF: A solid show, a few minor setups and 1 major was nice

FTCW
FTCW - good effort, a long opening segment builds for the main event, I get the impression Brooklyn Brawler as champion is here to stay, and I feel that he was booked exactly as he should be, clinging onto the title as the underdog.

PWI
PWI - another great show from Enigma, but I feel its lacking in star power. Only Aries stands out as a household name and its hard to imagine some of the guys being used in this fashion despite how well written the shows are.

ncfc_Tooze wrote:BWF - Again another very short show

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* Max of 6 Matches (no limit on PPV's)
* To be Written in Bullet Point Form
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* Promos are to be brief, just a rough idea of what is happening.

I fail to see the problem

Uryu Ishida wrote:does that mean me v nick will be 3-3?

What?

NickisBHAFC wrote:

Uryu Ishida wrote:does that mean me v nick will be 3-3?

What?

He thinks that because neither of you have won, you two will draw.

But the scores will not be 3-3, they'll be 0-6-0