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The_Enigma wrote:

NickisBHAFC wrote:Lads im sorry to announce, ill be leaving WWA. Im not around next week at all, so that will just cause problems.

Adam if he still wants to enter can have my roster, so he has the week to get the first show in for next weeks deadline

Sorry chaps, but cheers for the time and help!

I can see at least 3 things wrong with this post. Idiot.

Any need for that? Calm down it's just an internet game. I have said sorry, i did think the deadline was next week, not yesterday, i do think WWA is brilliant and i would love to be apart of it, but outside of work i simply have better things to do with my time. Like i say im sorry, ill be keeping a look out for the shows, and i look forward to see what everyone can up with, everyone usually does superb shows.

If you have better things to do with your time, why sign up? You were questioned and gave assurances that you'd stay, it is just a game, but one that people put a lot of time and effort into running. At leat it's not somethig you'll have to worry about again.

The_Enigma wrote:Lastly, I'd like to say Thank-You to Marky for stepping up and really digging us out of a whole here. Nick & CF will never step foot in WWA again! We're talking over how to reward Marky, so watch out for that in the coming days.

You could reward me by answering my Foreign bids and Releases

done & done

on a side note foreigns are now closed for the week.

I was going to suggest as a reward for Marky stepping in maybe a half price foreign transfer?

I think foreign transfers should be open for the week, just to Marky though. Seeing as there's a lot of apologising going on, I'll throw in mine, sorry I don't hit the home page chat much, I'm a little anti social, forums move too fast for me to keep up and I do too much. That being said, if anyone would like to chat with me find me on Facebook: Michael Mikado McCulloch

Marky,

Between Tooze, Fernando & Myself, we've had a quick chat and because you've stepped up, not only will you receive 10 Million for completing the Spotlight Podcast, but we'll chuck in an extra £10 Million to add to your transfer funds.

With Foreign Transfers shut, we're also going to accept your first Foreign Transfer Bid from this week, so you can accept and confirm your Vince McMahon Bid!

FOLLOW THE BUZZARDS  

The_Enigma wrote:Marky,

Between Tooze, Fernando & Myself, we've had a quick chat and because you've stepped up, not only will you receive 10 Million for completing the Spotlight Podcast, but we'll chuck in an extra £10 Million to add to your transfer funds.

With Foreign Transfers shut, we're also going to accept your first Foreign Transfer Bid from this week, so you can accept and confirm your Vince McMahon Bid!

Can you give me a definitive answer on whether I can sign Vince and The Rock? i've already confirmed both, you said I could have Vince and Nando said I could have Rock! Need to know as will need to write Week 2's show.

Also I'm away next week so will get my show up but will be unable to vote. Still gonna vote this week though.

You can confirm The Rock  

Originally it was supposed to be just the Vince McMahon bid, but there's been a slight bit of miss-communication from our part so you might as well have The Rock too. Don't worry about missing next week's voting. If you want to PM me, I can draw your Week 3 Injury so you can make a start on your next show....

Thanks

I wont be starting my Week 3 show until I'm back so no need for that, thanks anyway.

Voting due tonight right?

Thanks for reminding me Marky.

Guys, votes for Week 1 are due in tonight, so far we've only had votes from KLIQ Wrestling (Well I have anyway) can we please try and get something in before midnight tonight.

YEAH! Kliq Wrestling Rules! YEAH!

I sent mine to fernando ... do i need to send em to anyone else?

No, just one of Tooze/Fernando/Enigma. We've got yours now Jai, Fernando just posted them in admin.

Votes sent, do we still get the £2.5m for posting and £2.5m for voting bonus from last season?

Votes sent to all three of you.

FEAR THE COBRA  

You post on this page again doofus and im going to get Enforcer to ban your ass

Stop with this shield type stuff nick or I will ban you

Ok sorry guys  

Can i just say great shows from everyone this week, very impressed.

Where's the results? FFS

Morning all

Results

nXtreme 1-5 NGPW
Kliq 3-3 OPAL
ASWF 3-1-2 WOW
PWW 2-4 MWF

Feedback to come this evening

Didn't expect a win considering the lack of notice to get my show in

Must have been the sympathy vote Marky.

Clearly

Wow okay!

Well played Enigma/Nando, will read your show at lunch (only one I havent read yet)

Can I ask who voted a draw in Marky's match, are we allowing these this season?

Can I just say, every match I voted on was very tough to call, and nXtreme losing 5-1 is no reflection on how good the show was Gregers. NGPW was probably the best show of the week.

Also someone didn't vote as only 6 votes per match instead of 7.

Marky wrote:Also someone didn't vote as only 6 votes per match instead of 7.

Are you drunk at this time of the afternoon?

Are you?

(I'm not being serious BTW, figured you'd understand that Nando )

It's why i didn't reply 2nd time around, 1st time i thought was a good possibility of being drunk

Considering I wrote a 5k show I'm shocked I got any votes tbf, I have a feeling my feedback will confirm this...that and the awful Chris Señor pun haha

I have to say, I don't think we should allow draws when voting, it leads to people missing out on points and getting a loss when they could have a draw...to add to this, whoever the two people who voted for me are, thank you...I'm not playing for votes this season and really don't mind losing every week but it's nice to get votes.

Agreed with viper

No draw votes please!

Any news on when reasons are going up? Very interested to know what people thought of nXtreme S6E1

btw, the intro to nXtreme has sold me on the idea of starting an ongoing Federation so from next season (I know we're a while away) I'll be creating a show that will run and run.

No point changing this week's outcome as the voter who voted a draw would know the outcome of changing their vote. But I'm all for banning draws.

Call me impatient, but where's the feedback?

I need to post my show ASAP tomorrow as I'm off work after tomorrow and without work laptop where it's saved! And I'd like to see the feedback and edit accordingly first.

Shall do that now was busy writing matches for week 2.

Feed Back

ASWF
ASWF - good straight forward show with some good logical booking. The story was set up well for the remainder of the season.

AWSF - Considering the amount of time Marky had, he's managed to produce a quality show! Great ending with the tease, very much looking forward to seeing who's the owner of ASWF

Marky has done extremely well to produce a show for ASWF in the time he was given, while I think the tournament may become overshadowed by others I believe the show was strong with some cool moments to keep the reader interested in next weeks show, my only critisism booking wise would be the pairing Tyson Kidd and Scott Steiner as it felt as if he didn't know what to do with either man, this may clear up in the future though.

ASWF
Like
- Simply brilliant given inheriting half a roster
- Having a big old tournament to crown a champion, always a favourite of mine!
- Austin in a power struggle with Lauriniti and the "new" mystery owner
- Getting to read Marky's amazing writing!

Dislike
- Drew McIntyre losing...
- A little predictable with the winners, looking forward to the favourites coming up against each other

WOW

WOW - No criticism to give. A very solid show that is setting up the rest of the season well.

WOW - Mixed feelings about this show. While I love the theme of this comic-book style, Good Vs Evil, I'm not sure I can take Hurricane & Shark-Boy seriously, unless they get a really strong build up, Show produced some great matches and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes next week.

WOW was full of cool ideas such as the power struggle between Long and Trump and the use of a five count but for me some of the booking didn't make sense. Though it made sense by the end of the show to have Shark Boy and Hurricane looking strong I felt as if The Biscoes and The Shield were booked to look slightly weak, the tournament is a cool idea but I feel that it could be overshadowed by the fact that a lot of the feds seem to be going down this route. Overall a nice use of the roster, giving us a show that didn't feel over packed but still utilised a large number of the roster members

WOW
Like
- Use of Jackman alongside the Superheroes!
- Donald Trump, perfect foil and a great pick from foreigns
- SHIELD vs Superheroes and Hunter? WOW indeed
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Dislike
- A touch long if im being brutal

MWF

MWF - Solid first show but overall it was missing a little spark about it. It seemed quite short on matches (although it did have 4) but just seemed a little flat. Nice tease at the end though

MWF - Solid start to the season with a decent opening card. Lots of focus and effort in building the main-event with the Hall of Fame nod a nice touch. Women's match was excellent and I'm looking forward to seeing an exiting division. Show could have done with an extra match & segment to develop other characters.

MWF - Enjoyable read but it's hard to get into the show considering the lack of mainstream names. Tooze is a big fan of small wrestling shows and if I'm honest this reads like one of those, but it may cost votes as I don't see it standing out above other shows in WWA.

MWF
Like
- The continuity between seasons, get a feel its a true heritage
- AJ Lee beating Britani Knight? I did read that right Tooze? And Rush getting involved, Boom an awesome Womens division is born!
- The ending, one word... SUPERB
Dislike
- I would have liked a bit more backstage but I love the traditional British feel MWF always has

PWW

Prestige - It felt a real effort to read it all as it was way too long! However, there were some really good ideas in there and it was quite funny at times, if a little too silly in some parts. A lot of effort has gone in to the show and hopefully it will be more succint in future weeks.

PWW - Fantastic amount of effort has gone into show, including the formatting! It really does need trimming down though, as I find myself skipping segments and missing key bits of information. Action was fun, although slightly silly at times to make an entertaining show. Loved the Hardcore Scramble Match

PWW - A very long show. Segments need to be summarised rather than played out in full IMO. Formatting matches isn't necessary and makes the show a little harder to read if I'm honest. Weed the People is clever. Miz and Bo Dallas could have legs as well.

PWW
Like
- Lego pit of doom made me chuckle... A LOT!
- The general humour, Rey Mizterio is just hillarious as is Chavo GuerrerBO! And as for SWORD!
- Good to see the old fashioned championship scramble
- Chris Benoit/Senor and the whole cant perform due to past issues. Brilliant and original idea
Dislike
- Far, far, far too long. For that reason alone its a loss from me this week and will be until it is shorter!
- Opening too long for a first show in my opinion, if a real show then likely viewers would have switched to one that had a match quickly!

Nxtreme

nXtreme - very good first show with a great roster. The only real downside
is that the show didnt really excite or tease me for next weeks show.

nXtreme - Great show, I feel nXtreme have gone for it but are lacking a little star power in their roster. Enjoyable read though and look forward to next week.

nXtreme as always provides an entertaining show with a lot of backstory, the only problem I see is the fact that this season a lot of the feds are using tournament, nXtreme's advantage is the way this tournament works out with it leading to the main event match, a nice use of roster and some good match ups though a bit short at times.

NGPW

NGPW - Excellent match ups (as in ones I would like to see in real life)
with very good booking and an excellent flow to the show. Favourite show of
the week.

NGPW - Equally great show, loved the main event and the rebirth of the ECW Title. Some great matches and all had a big fight feel to them.

NGPW had me hooked with the mystery president along with their obsession with hardcore wrestling, I liked the Corino reveal with the ECW title being brought in but once again we have another tournament that may get lost due to the others, I felt the show was great overall but the use of singles matches for 5 out of the 6 matches felt repetitive.

KLIQ

KLIQ: Wasn't the grand opening show i was expecting felt a little disappointed by it personally, I like the Dr X Storyline & the push of Uhaa Nation, intrigued by the BBBM character not sure who it is. Overall was solid but could do better tbh

Kliq - A much more storyline based show, decent matches with a theme and good to see someone like Uhaa Nation being Champion.

KLIQ for me had some good ideas, the prize felt belt is an interesting concept and the league itself is very cool, the only problem I had was we were given 6 fatal four ways, I assume that each week won't be like this? The show was short but packed a lot in and it had some funny moments but still came across as if booked seriously

Kliq
Like
- Prizefighter title is a superb idea
- No world title on offer first show
- Very interesting roster!
Dislike
- I felt the opening dragged a bit, but it was superb writing

OPAL

OPAL: For a 1st go at WWA, This is exceptionally good from Jai very good opener considering a woman's match with the alliance between CVE & Alicia Fox, Hogan in a mentor role is something id actually like to see in TNA, Hogan vs Mutoh's students will be very good big fan of Okada, Loved the commentary quite funny in places, The battle royal was well written considering the amount of people in it. Interested to see where you go with Solomon Crowe as champion especially as it seems to include Christian by the ending arguing with ref.

OPAL - Decent show, I enjoyed it but it seemed to be lacking any real storylines. Nice ending with Crowe winning the title. More to come hopefully

While OPAL provided a well written, obviously thought out show it didn't feel like it had any stand out moments and some of the booking didn't work for me, it felt as if Jai was trying too hard to use the entire roster and matches like Khali and Scurll felt too much like a WWE Squash Match. Overall a strong show that had a good use of the commentary team and was nice to see the diva's used how they were.

Opal
Like
- The style of writing with Who, Where From, Weight
- Good use of commentators
- Very interesting choice of winner of the World Title, will be interesting to see where this goes
Dislike
- Need some more formatting, maybe use quote for each of the non wrestling bits?
- A touch long with the two title matches but a great starting show nonetheless

Feedback just as I thought but thank you for the kind words...glad people liked parts of it, also good news...the last show was 5300 words, the second one is about 1500 with only the matches to go...I'll be keeping the silliness though haha.

While OPAL provided a well written, obviously thought out show it didn't feel like it had any stand out moments and some of the booking didn't work for me, it felt as if Jai was trying too hard to use the entire roster and matches like Khali and Scurll felt too much like a WWE Squash Match. Overall a strong show that had a good use of the commentary team and was nice to see the diva's used how they were.

Interesting feedback, in my opinion nothing wrong with a squash match

Cant argue with my feedback except for lack of star power... AJ, Aries, Joe, Kaz, Edwards, Richards, Bennett? While they're not WWE guys they are all big names!